pretty good start
good chord arpegios, nothin amazing, but not bad
good start, build with the ambience, intro drags out a little bit, takes a bit for anyeone to hear that its going anywhere, but i do hear it
would probably have been better as a full blown ambient song, instead of dance
agh dude...that part after the ambient parts sound like its a completly different song, i wish it would have stayed in the ambient side along with the dance stuff
when the kick comes in, its a bit weak, try eqing and compressing your kicks to get some serious punch
the ambient half was good, the dance half was good after it got out of the intro, but when their both together, they dont fit or flow very well together
meh, could use a better ending, mabye fall back into the ambient section? : \
vocals were good, did you record those yourself? they were quite good
the dance part, now that i think of it, had like a bassline, kicks, hats and stuff, but you were missing a vital part, the awesome trance melodies dude!!! you gotta spend some time making really good melodies that go with the basslines, instead of relying on the basslines to do the job of the melody
hopefully my review wasnt to harsh : \
SessileNomad
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