SessileNomad's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Smash Box]

what no longer version??

dude this is an awesome beat, you gotta make this full

ShinyArmor responds:

thanks... i'll try

[The Hungry Dance]

very nice

sounds like it could be in the old SNES games

ShinyArmor responds:

Which? lol

[.HLS. Distant]

i have a question

when your main melody comes up, it starts quite and builds up...how do you do that, do you just set raise up the volume in the settings of the instrament???

cuz i have a song where im trying to do that, and every time i remake the volume it still never comes out good, help me out please

as for your song, its almost perfect, but it needs a heavier bass, other than that i have no complaints

heartless1298 responds:

Thanks for the review!! And I'll PM you about your question.

[Never Fall]

im assuming

you made this on FL studio, if so you need to put in a nice pad or somthing

pads will fill the empty noise that your song has in some places like right after the intro,

and i think you should do mabye another backup trumpet or orchestration

speaking of directly after the intro, i would create a second trumpet/orchestra/whatever it is your using to go over that, then it would keep intrest better

thats all i got to say, but im no music master myself, if you would plz reveiw my stuff cuz i know most of it needs honest opinions

Taketheleap responds:

I have no problem reviewing your stuff, I'm allways looking for good opinions. Within the next day I'll go over yours and comment, you should check out the rest of mine. Speaking of, Thanks for the comment. I was looking for something a little more specific, and you answered a bunch of questions. Yeah I use FL8, Still trying to get the hang of everything. I mostly make this music for A game of Dnd I run with my friends, as background music. Thanks again, you'll hear from me soon.
-Leap

[Rave Baby]

plz finish

and when you do please msg me cuz i want to here this finished

what synths and effects you usin?

Pyroific responds:

i used the adam van baker z3ta+ soundbank prodomently through this one cause i just bought it :D

[Polka, or not]

if you did this

just re-write the intro with another melody, and place your drums in, it would be much much better

bassically im sayin ur intro is good but not the rest

ShinyArmor responds:

yeah i know. its just cant because i made it using a demo of FL studio and it was wayy too long ago, but you know what. i'm gonna remake it... its not so bad

[It's a Knightmare!]

hey me 2

im still learning the basics of FL as well, check my stuff

wow you use alot of voice clips in here, it would be ok if they were your own, but all these come from FL, and FL has really bad voice-clips

try writing out some nice treble melodies, it would give this a less repetitive feel

Wesko responds:

i would like to use my own voice clips but i dont have a mike, so i was stuck with using FL's. I'll make sure to check out your stuff sometime!

[Test Demo Song]

hmmm...

the beggining doesnt sound like it could ever be in a trance song, it sounds too....elevator music-ish

idk i know its just a demo, but it would take alot of work to make this a nice trance tune

ShinyArmor responds:

yeah i know... it still needs some work. and time, i'll show you the real one soon

[BeatSource - Among Angels]

i give you 8 cuz

it seems repetitive and plus there isnt a treble melody until the end

i do like the orchestral ending though, very angelly

hah i luv how you commented about zergs

Ethalyn responds:

Hah yeah zergs! xD Yeah huh, treble melody? Yeah hey thanks for the 8 man ^_^

[Twinkle Cart/ Park (xsakux)]

nice!

probly the best video game song ive heard on NG, really nice

DreamEater responds:

why does the "best" get a 9 then D=?

~saku