SessileNomad's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-[Mr.C]- Club Beat]

aaggh

i dont really like distortion on kicks, but they do have there place if your going for the gabber genre, buut this track is too slow to be gabber, gabber is like 180+bpm, somthin like that, this is around 140 i think

also, theres no melody man, i wouldnt even reccomend posting anything if it doesnt have some sort of melody, you got alot of drums, and some fx goin on, but ALWAYS have some melody, at least thats what i think

this could easily become a great gabber track, mabye even hardstyle if you pulled it off right, but i cant give this a good score, so i give you 5, and im not going to vote on it

you at least know how to compose basic things, i think you should just stick with songs for longer periods of time b4 posting, you know?

Mr-Carrothead responds:

Yeah, this kinda sucks

I need to find the patience and skills to actually make something good

[-[Mr.C]- Something New]

eh...

well you got the cliche techno bassline goin(its not always bad, but its heard in like EVERY freakin techno song ever)

you dont really have a chorus, idk if your gona fix this up, but yeah...get a chorus
xD

wow it loops perfectly

your drums are all fine, sounds nice

hey would you check out some of my music, preferably my newer shit?

peace, im off to see your other works

Mr-Carrothead responds:

Yeah, it's the bassline that you find in EVERY SONG :S

I've been trying to use different ones but it's so hard

But I will, as soon as something sounds good I will use it

Yeah I wanted it to loop, and the drums to make up for the fact that it's so generic :P

And yeah I'll check out ur music

[.HLS. 2 Channel Challenge]

lolzal

your "delay" on the crash sound just fine

again with the reese, how art thou so good with it?

i really dont think its all that shnazzy, but hell your only using two channels so im not gona bitch

heartless1298 responds:

haha yea thanks

[.HLS. Egyptian DnB]

nicenice

classic dnb drum loop, works every time

awesome melody you got goin, i like your use of the reese, personally i can never make it sound good at all, so i always use more gameboyish sounds as my basses

kinda short but whatever, what bpm is this?

heartless1298 responds:

Thanks! I forget what the BPM is, it's been a while since I was in the .flp

[.HLS. Winter Wonderland 09]

ahhh nice

i love it man, not as epic feeling as the original, but id say more dancable to

i love that at 2:39. classic melody

LOL this is a demo!!!!! hahahaha, where did you get those vocals?

great work man, very chill

heartless1298 responds:

Thanks! And I got the vocals from a friend, zellers. He got them from this legendary dude himself, cause the legendary dude made them.

[Revolution!!!]

holy fucking god....

why the fuck doesnt this have a higher score...this is fuckin incredible man

its so upbeat but in a firey explosion kinda way

you should make this about 3 times longer man, the was amazing, no complaints at all

5/5
10/10
i would dl but i dont really do that
fav

blackattackbitch responds:

Thanks man, I will work on this eventually, but right now I got A LOT of stuff to do. At the moment, I'm wondering if I'll be able to work on any music in the near future, as something really really bad happened to my laptop.

I'm about to check out your new song now.

Thanks again!

[Rise of a new King]

wow

you must be amazing at piano to improv this

i love your fuckin strings after that, awesome horns too man

100% epic-ness on this

what horn vst's are your using? cuz i have a firned who could really use them for a classical piece he is doing

DukeLukeProd responds:

nah I'm very bad at playing the piano but it's enough to make monophonic melodies.
The horns are from EWQL Symphonic Orchestra Silver & Gold.
Thanks for the review!

[MAC9: Reunited!]

yay my pc stopped fuckin up

i listened to it once through now im listening again and reviewing

intro is good, it really does a great job of showing that the lovers are meeting for the first time in forever

like the flutes afterward, gives me the feeling that the two are feeling the highest form of perfect peace, so yeah flutes good, i think some chimes or bells would go nicly in the background there though

at :53, it has a really uplifting feel to it, which again is what two lovers should feel then...

1:26, i love that alot it has this totally creepy feel to it

1:41 i like this to cuz it smoothly starts to become happy again

i would try to find some better horns for that ensemble right after all that, the notes are all good, but the quality of the particular horns just isnt epic enough, ide recommend trying to find some vst's

2:12, has an odd ethnice feel to it, im not sure where the ethnicity might be from but its just odd, which is not bad

im not going to bash on your outro, cuz this isnt complete, but i cant really give any advice as to what to do with it, so your on your own there

pm me when you have your final masterpeice finished

9/10-im anticipating an oustanding final
5/5-plain and simple it was great

peace

Sessile

blackattackbitch responds:

Thanks man, I'm taking all of your advice into consideration. Unfortunately I can't do anything about those horns as that section is forcibly saved due to yet another computer failure. At least I anticipated this one though and did as much as I could with the song before I let the computer die that time.

I can still add the chimes and bells though, and expect them in the finished copy if I can get some good sounding bells.

Can't figure out the ethnic sound though. Must have been the type of woodwind I used. That's the only thing I can think of.

Sorry I can't type more, but I gotta get around to checking out your songs, can't let that delay anymore. Peace!

[Oceanic Wanderlust (WIP)]

wow man

good job on this, your pretty good at songs with stories behind them

omg i love those tumpets at :23, there sorta in the background, they really give this an epic feel

nice chill out part

nice part after that, really makes it feel very dangerous

hmmm......my advice....well this is sorta just cuz i like this story and ide like to see it go a little longer, i think you should make a series of songs encompassing the captains journey to get to wherever the treasure is, i think right after this song(or during it or whatever), he should get eaten by the hydra, and kinda have to go through what pinochios grandpa guy had to, but thats just me

good job on this, your really good at using orchestras and stuff to capture the mood of everything

blackattackbitch responds:

I don't know why, but that's just the way it happens. This one actually started off pretty random. I was trying out all the drum samples I had so I could really make it sound good, then I wanted to try letting woodwinds carry the melody. Then I decided to hook it up with a timpani roll, then aluva sudden I realized I had a oceanic-journey-type song. Never finished it though, for a number of reasons. I was actually working towards its end, but my comp failed, scrapping at least half of it. anyways, thanks man for the good reviews. Peace!