SessileNomad's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[.HLS. Distant]

i have a question

when your main melody comes up, it starts quite and builds up...how do you do that, do you just set raise up the volume in the settings of the instrament???

cuz i have a song where im trying to do that, and every time i remake the volume it still never comes out good, help me out please

as for your song, its almost perfect, but it needs a heavier bass, other than that i have no complaints

heartless1298 responds:

Thanks for the review!! And I'll PM you about your question.

[Never Fall]

im assuming

you made this on FL studio, if so you need to put in a nice pad or somthing

pads will fill the empty noise that your song has in some places like right after the intro,

and i think you should do mabye another backup trumpet or orchestration

speaking of directly after the intro, i would create a second trumpet/orchestra/whatever it is your using to go over that, then it would keep intrest better

thats all i got to say, but im no music master myself, if you would plz reveiw my stuff cuz i know most of it needs honest opinions

Taketheleap responds:

I have no problem reviewing your stuff, I'm allways looking for good opinions. Within the next day I'll go over yours and comment, you should check out the rest of mine. Speaking of, Thanks for the comment. I was looking for something a little more specific, and you answered a bunch of questions. Yeah I use FL8, Still trying to get the hang of everything. I mostly make this music for A game of Dnd I run with my friends, as background music. Thanks again, you'll hear from me soon.
-Leap

[[DH]The Paramount]

FL studio

you can find places to download it by looking on youtube, i have FL studio XXL(which is like 700$ or somthing), and i got it for free

you should def. check it out, it makes making music much easier

now for the song...i really like the guitar, piano riff is pretty amazing

[Rave Baby]

plz finish

and when you do please msg me cuz i want to here this finished

what synths and effects you usin?

Pyroific responds:

i used the adam van baker z3ta+ soundbank prodomently through this one cause i just bought it :D

[Polka, or not]

if you did this

just re-write the intro with another melody, and place your drums in, it would be much much better

bassically im sayin ur intro is good but not the rest

ShinyArmor responds:

yeah i know. its just cant because i made it using a demo of FL studio and it was wayy too long ago, but you know what. i'm gonna remake it... its not so bad

[Boss fight in luigi's mansion]

dude

sweet song, never played the game though

[[tC] - Unprecedented]

nice

it feels very floating-ish

nice drumline, very odd when the hat comes in

[The Broken SNES]

very good

the whole 1:22 would be a great intro, if it like exploaded with a heavy kick and a synthy lead using the same melody and faster...if that makes sense

but for the intro..i give you 8

[Taste the Blood]

decent...

played in higher octaves and faster it could sound like the old System stuff

intro is nice..but it is kinda repetitive...reminds me of 007 for N64 for some reason too

[It's a Knightmare!]

hey me 2

im still learning the basics of FL as well, check my stuff

wow you use alot of voice clips in here, it would be ok if they were your own, but all these come from FL, and FL has really bad voice-clips

try writing out some nice treble melodies, it would give this a less repetitive feel

Wesko responds:

i would like to use my own voice clips but i dont have a mike, so i was stuck with using FL's. I'll make sure to check out your stuff sometime!