it was...
good, i think you dragged out the plucked intro quite a bit, plus you ended the song real fast, right when the main synth hit too...:(
im not very good at hardstyle either, but i listen to ALOT of it, and if you want some dudes to take some pointers from, listen to Showtek(or shotek), and Dj Zany
the lead synth has somthing about it i dont like, it kinda only gets the job halfway done for really sounding like a powerful hardstyle synth
idk i know this isnt your genre but i think you did ok, your tetris remix was much better though xD
id say stick with the p-trance, your much better at it