yeah too simple
ide say eiher write a second melody, or keep that one and make it more complex
i think melodoes like this are good for like starting points to bitchin melodies, but ive only heard like 2 hardstyle tracks by well known people that were this simple
im not feelin the distorted kicks man, i mean jumpstyle is cool and all, but i think its just a personal thing that i like clean powerful kicks over jump kicks
also i think you played with the fades way to long, the kicks should come in sooner, just me though
p-trance definatly suites you better, but depending on where you go with this, it could end up being real nice
peace out
SessileNomad